He knew - chapter 5
Apr. 29th, 2009 01:01 amTitle: He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 5
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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I am dead tired, so there might be more mistakes than usual, please forgive me. Also I am back from Paris (which was tiring but great as always:) so I should update faster again. And I have decided about the ending, I think … I hope this chapter wasn´t a letdown, it was a bit of a filler, it´s working title was Ryo lurking around, and I hope I got the point across.
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 5
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
This fic was moved to my writing community
I am dead tired, so there might be more mistakes than usual, please forgive me. Also I am back from Paris (which was tiring but great as always:) so I should update faster again. And I have decided about the ending, I think … I hope this chapter wasn´t a letdown, it was a bit of a filler, it´s working title was Ryo lurking around, and I hope I got the point across.
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Date: 2009-04-29 08:38 pm (UTC)Also, didn´t you just write exactly the same as what Ueda said to Maru, that it didn´t really matter, wheteher Ryo had read the notebook or not, that it was enough he treated him poorly? See, you think the same way...
I am suprised, that people like this chapter, because i was afraid it will be chaotic, and I had trouble writing it ...
Lol, my productivity is a mystery to me too:) I wonder how long it will last, well it should until the end of this multichap:)
btw look at the icon I am going to use, i made it, it sucks, but lol my own ryoda manip:)
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Date: 2009-04-29 08:44 pm (UTC)and don´t worrz the chapter is not chaotic ..or I don´t think so
and wow you need to teach me how to do that manipulation .... I waaaannaaaaaaaa