He knew - chapter 12

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 12
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: dark parks at midnight hold explanations


I was frightened to write this talk of theirs and I am still not happy about how it turned out but oh well. I can´t do better at the moment. Also how the hell did it become sooo long?  Let me know what you think.

As always comments and constructive criticism are love.

Comments

[miruiki.livejournal.com]

THIS.
:'(
it REALLY. squeezed my chest. Everytime Ryo got the wrong idea, My chest tightened. :( NEVERTHELESS. Ueda cried for Ryo.. AGAIN! :'D YEHEY~!!!
Damn. Notebooks can bring such problems huh. XDDDDDDDD *wonders if a ballpen could to the same thing* *bricks self*

there were still some errors and misspelled words, nevertheless it was good :)

CONTINUE.
or else i wont share massu no more XDDD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

sorry about the spelling I ended up posting this in quite a hurry, so ...
Well, I will continue even though it´s nearing the end:) So don´t be mean about Massu here:) He will not be a ransom !!! :)