He knew - chapter 12

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 12
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta




This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: dark parks at midnight hold explanations


I was frightened to write this talk of theirs and I am still not happy about how it turned out but oh well. I can´t do better at the moment. Also how the hell did it become sooo long?  Let me know what you think.

As always comments and constructive criticism are love.

Comments

[resha-ueda.livejournal.com]

first?

[resha-ueda.livejournal.com]

THIS... this is beautifully written~
I pretty much love how they interacted

*hugs ryo for waiting*

♥

[miruiki.livejournal.com]

THIS.
:'(
it REALLY. squeezed my chest. Everytime Ryo got the wrong idea, My chest tightened. :( NEVERTHELESS. Ueda cried for Ryo.. AGAIN! :'D YEHEY~!!!
Damn. Notebooks can bring such problems huh. XDDDDDDDD *wonders if a ballpen could to the same thing* *bricks self*

there were still some errors and misspelled words, nevertheless it was good :)

CONTINUE.
or else i wont share massu no more XDDD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

sorry about the spelling I ended up posting this in quite a hurry, so ...
Well, I will continue even though it´s nearing the end:) So don´t be mean about Massu here:) He will not be a ransom !!! :)

[pleu16.livejournal.com]

Oh my God. I love it. I love this so much.

I feel Ryo's pain. And it hurts sooo goood. LOL. Sorry. I just remembered that line from somewhere. Eeep.

Good job. :)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

No problem, maso is fun:) anyway, glad you liked it and thanks for reading ...

[isodia.livejournal.com]

I really really love this chapter a lot! I know I must have said in other chapters but I just DO!
You made me feel everything in it -- Ryo's pain and Tat-chan's confusion, etc... You wrote this wonderfully and I felt like I was watching it off the screen... ^_^
A really wonderful chapter. And did I say I love this story and that you're an amazing writer?! ^_^
♥ ♥ ♥

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

oh *blushing like crazy* thanks a lot, it´s always so nice to hear someone likes my story ... it´s also verinteresting to know, you made someone feel what your characters do ... so ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[kazuya-love.livejournal.com]

uwaa~~ nice talk between Ryo and Hime.. good job...

^^, *hugs*

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

was it? did it make sense? than I am glad ... thanks for reading ...

[resha-hime.livejournal.com]

I just don't know anymore. D= Why do things have to be so complicated? T____T I suppose things are really all up to Ueda now. Ryo is clear about what he wants if only Ueda would feel the same. JUST. Sigh.

I really wonder how this will end.

Oh and Ryo waiting till dawn in the park broke my heart. I should take action against you for occasioning grievous harm. D=

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I am sorry if I am making it too complicated, I guess it´s because that´s how my life has been lately and those two are in the process ...
Anyway just in case, Are you from Europeand Union country? I want to know how big a chance is the whole suing project might be succesful, cause it may get pretty hard for me if you are, I might actually go to court before I graduate!!! Not even mentioning a judgement against me could be enforced ...
Should i write I hold no responsibilities over readers emotions from now on?
... sorry I got caried away, thank you for reading ...

[shobe12.livejournal.com]

this is just wonderful..

finally they talk with each other.
and got things a bit straight.

ry0 waited for him so long..

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I too think it´s a good thing they talked ...
Thanks for reading:)

[red-aka-merah.livejournal.com]

Waaa......it's really good....to let them met and talk...
i was crying while reading 'cause i could feel the pain in their hearts....
don't worry, i think u did really well and i can't wait to read the next one....
thanks for sharing ne......;)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Ah sorry to make you cry:) Thanks for reading ... i really wanted them to talk things over so ...

[jindaluver.livejournal.com]

why is it so hard for them to be together?
so complicated...it's painful *cries*

really like this.will be waiting for next ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading and liking ... why you ask? hmmm life is complecated ... but you know, they got some things straight now, so ...

[winnie03.livejournal.com]

this chapter is good too. you really write well ^_^
my heart is hurting while reading it. i felt ryo's pain, and it seems that he's resigned and assuming already that it's too late for ueda to love him. well i hope not.. i do love happy endings ^_^
looking forward for another update ^_^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

heh, thanks again, i am glad you like my writting:) But i should really stop angsting, right:)

[yamapi-konkon.livejournal.com]

Ryo's so sweet! ♥ Tatsuya finally showed him the black notebook. :)


Thank you~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

you are welcome:) anyway thank you for always reading and commenting ...

[pwoth.livejournal.com]

Ryo is so sweet...
But what's gonna happen now?!?! AH!!
Hope you update soon ^w^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I´ll try to be fast altough I am going home in like an hour so it might be longer than usual (considering my standard updating frequency:)
Thank you for reading and supporting though ...

[messyboo.livejournal.com]

uwaa!!!
finally tat-chan can cry!!!
*cries with him*
i love this so much!!!
thanks for the update~
*hugs*

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Yeaaaah ... someone noticed:) That really was what I tried to establish here, he finally cried like he said he needed to:)
Anyway thank you for reading and commenting:) *returns the hug*

[alaruber.livejournal.com]

aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww......
i love this... so touching... but ryo-chan is such a sweet baka ne.... XD

thanks for the update this part is fantastic :)
looking forward to the next chapter

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Oh thank you sooo much for making me feel better about it :)
I hope I won´t disapoint you with the next one:)

[zelpet001.livejournal.com]

I only wanted to make a comment after i read all 12 chapters. I can say that it took me some time :D
but i like the story, it has a nice feel to it, but too many sad moments, sometimes i was almost crying (T_T)
liked the messages of ryo - the were really kawaii :)
keep up the good work, looking forward for the next chapters :D
v(^.^)v

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Oh thank you for reading through the whole thing:) I bet it took a lot of time, all in all it´s freaking long:)

Anyway sorry about the sad parts even I am surprised how angsty it turned out:)

And I can not resist, I just wondered who you are, so I clicked on your LJ and so on.. sorry about the intrusion, but ...
Good luck with exams in Belgium and Hungary and enjoy Erasmus while you can, it´s the best:) Oh and we are basically neighbours:) Anyway break a leg or something:)

[brown-cinnamon.livejournal.com]

it looks so good for me, I mean the talk.
Have more confidence, dear!
Thanks for writing ♥

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

oh thanks, it makes me happy people like it ... for me it was a mess I wanted them to progress and to talk through a lot and I had a feeling I made it more complicated instead of a bit "solved" ...
So thanks again:)

[lunatic-wing.livejournal.com]

everything are going good,right?
ah RyoDa is always LOVE ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

yeah ... it is, it is LOVE:)
thanks for reading:)

[oxokawaiiox.livejournal.com]

kaiis first of all : YEY!!! i caught up : )

and second....omg they FINALLY talked?! owh myyy....their talk was sooo good, at least they understand each other neee????
ahhh, yenno ryo always seems to get the wrong idea, is it because he is scared of ueda's rejectionn??? but then i got my answer when ryo asked him if he believed himself and ueda said yes . hehe, cutee♥

and finally tat-chan cried. i was hoping for ryo to stay there with him, but even though he was crying alone, it ened off smooth and awesome 7hearts;

thanks~~~ can't wait till you update ; ) (lol~ i'll catch up)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

You caught up completely, wau ...:)
O am glad you liked their talk ... and I think Ryo just needs some time to think things over:)
I think it was better for Tat-chan to cry alone ... to be free to cry as long as he needed ...
And thank you again for being so generous to me when commenting:) ♥

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

AH-I felt fee after they broke up but now Ueda cries I feel free-er....Is that possible?

The talk was great, I glad you "sucked" it, like you seem to feel.
Finally they both reveal the truth about hidden happenings, finally Ueda knows about the notebook and Ryo WILL get the hint.
At first I felt terrible for Ryo, being in the cold and dark, I hope he's not that pale anymore. He's so thin already!

Ah~ finally catching up a little

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

well the talk was very much needed I just always feel like I strayed away so much from what I wabted to say ... but on the other hand, that´s how the normal human conversations are...

so thanks for catching up:) and yes it si possible, it was liberating:)