He knew - chapter 12

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 12
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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I was frightened to write this talk of theirs and I am still not happy about how it turned out but oh well. I can´t do better at the moment. Also how the hell did it become sooo long?  Let me know what you think.

As always comments and constructive criticism are love.

Comments

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

AH-I felt fee after they broke up but now Ueda cries I feel free-er....Is that possible?

The talk was great, I glad you "sucked" it, like you seem to feel.
Finally they both reveal the truth about hidden happenings, finally Ueda knows about the notebook and Ryo WILL get the hint.
At first I felt terrible for Ryo, being in the cold and dark, I hope he's not that pale anymore. He's so thin already!

Ah~ finally catching up a little

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

well the talk was very much needed I just always feel like I strayed away so much from what I wabted to say ... but on the other hand, that´s how the normal human conversations are...

so thanks for catching up:) and yes it si possible, it was liberating:)