He knew - chapter 12

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 12
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta




This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: dark parks at midnight hold explanations


I was frightened to write this talk of theirs and I am still not happy about how it turned out but oh well. I can´t do better at the moment. Also how the hell did it become sooo long?  Let me know what you think.

As always comments and constructive criticism are love.

Comments

[resha-ueda.livejournal.com]

first?

[resha-ueda.livejournal.com]

THIS... this is beautifully written~
I pretty much love how they interacted

*hugs ryo for waiting*

♥

[miruiki.livejournal.com]

THIS.
:'(
it REALLY. squeezed my chest. Everytime Ryo got the wrong idea, My chest tightened. :( NEVERTHELESS. Ueda cried for Ryo.. AGAIN! :'D YEHEY~!!!
Damn. Notebooks can bring such problems huh. XDDDDDDDD *wonders if a ballpen could to the same thing* *bricks self*

there were still some errors and misspelled words, nevertheless it was good :)

CONTINUE.
or else i wont share massu no more XDDD

[pleu16.livejournal.com]

Oh my God. I love it. I love this so much.

I feel Ryo's pain. And it hurts sooo goood. LOL. Sorry. I just remembered that line from somewhere. Eeep.

Good job. :)

[isodia.livejournal.com]

I really really love this chapter a lot! I know I must have said in other chapters but I just DO!
You made me feel everything in it -- Ryo's pain and Tat-chan's confusion, etc... You wrote this wonderfully and I felt like I was watching it off the screen... ^_^
A really wonderful chapter. And did I say I love this story and that you're an amazing writer?! ^_^
♥ ♥ ♥

[kazuya-love.livejournal.com]

uwaa~~ nice talk between Ryo and Hime.. good job...

^^, *hugs*

[resha-hime.livejournal.com]

I just don't know anymore. D= Why do things have to be so complicated? T____T I suppose things are really all up to Ueda now. Ryo is clear about what he wants if only Ueda would feel the same. JUST. Sigh.

I really wonder how this will end.

Oh and Ryo waiting till dawn in the park broke my heart. I should take action against you for occasioning grievous harm. D=

[shobe12.livejournal.com]

this is just wonderful..

finally they talk with each other.
and got things a bit straight.

ry0 waited for him so long..

[red-aka-merah.livejournal.com]

Waaa......it's really good....to let them met and talk...
i was crying while reading 'cause i could feel the pain in their hearts....
don't worry, i think u did really well and i can't wait to read the next one....
thanks for sharing ne......;)

[jindaluver.livejournal.com]

why is it so hard for them to be together?
so complicated...it's painful *cries*

really like this.will be waiting for next ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

oh thank you ♥ and cingrats on being first:)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

sorry about the spelling I ended up posting this in quite a hurry, so ...
Well, I will continue even though it´s nearing the end:) So don´t be mean about Massu here:) He will not be a ransom !!! :)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

No problem, maso is fun:) anyway, glad you liked it and thanks for reading ...

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

oh *blushing like crazy* thanks a lot, it´s always so nice to hear someone likes my story ... it´s also verinteresting to know, you made someone feel what your characters do ... so ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

was it? did it make sense? than I am glad ... thanks for reading ...

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I am sorry if I am making it too complicated, I guess it´s because that´s how my life has been lately and those two are in the process ...
Anyway just in case, Are you from Europeand Union country? I want to know how big a chance is the whole suing project might be succesful, cause it may get pretty hard for me if you are, I might actually go to court before I graduate!!! Not even mentioning a judgement against me could be enforced ...
Should i write I hold no responsibilities over readers emotions from now on?
... sorry I got caried away, thank you for reading ...

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I too think it´s a good thing they talked ...
Thanks for reading:)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Ah sorry to make you cry:) Thanks for reading ... i really wanted them to talk things over so ...

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading and liking ... why you ask? hmmm life is complecated ... but you know, they got some things straight now, so ...

[winnie03.livejournal.com]

this chapter is good too. you really write well ^_^
my heart is hurting while reading it. i felt ryo's pain, and it seems that he's resigned and assuming already that it's too late for ueda to love him. well i hope not.. i do love happy endings ^_^
looking forward for another update ^_^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

heh, thanks again, i am glad you like my writting:) But i should really stop angsting, right:)

[yamapi-konkon.livejournal.com]

Ryo's so sweet! ♥ Tatsuya finally showed him the black notebook. :)


Thank you~

[pwoth.livejournal.com]

Ryo is so sweet...
But what's gonna happen now?!?! AH!!
Hope you update soon ^w^

[messyboo.livejournal.com]

uwaa!!!
finally tat-chan can cry!!!
*cries with him*
i love this so much!!!
thanks for the update~
*hugs*

[alaruber.livejournal.com]

aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww......
i love this... so touching... but ryo-chan is such a sweet baka ne.... XD

thanks for the update this part is fantastic :)
looking forward to the next chapter