He knew - chapter 12

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 12
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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I was frightened to write this talk of theirs and I am still not happy about how it turned out but oh well. I can´t do better at the moment. Also how the hell did it become sooo long?  Let me know what you think.

As always comments and constructive criticism are love.

Comments

[isodia.livejournal.com]

I really really love this chapter a lot! I know I must have said in other chapters but I just DO!
You made me feel everything in it -- Ryo's pain and Tat-chan's confusion, etc... You wrote this wonderfully and I felt like I was watching it off the screen... ^_^
A really wonderful chapter. And did I say I love this story and that you're an amazing writer?! ^_^
♥ ♥ ♥

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

oh *blushing like crazy* thanks a lot, it´s always so nice to hear someone likes my story ... it´s also verinteresting to know, you made someone feel what your characters do ... so ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥