He knew - chapter 12

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 12
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: dark parks at midnight hold explanations


I was frightened to write this talk of theirs and I am still not happy about how it turned out but oh well. I can´t do better at the moment. Also how the hell did it become sooo long?  Let me know what you think.

As always comments and constructive criticism are love.

Comments

[zelpet001.livejournal.com]

I only wanted to make a comment after i read all 12 chapters. I can say that it took me some time :D
but i like the story, it has a nice feel to it, but too many sad moments, sometimes i was almost crying (T_T)
liked the messages of ryo - the were really kawaii :)
keep up the good work, looking forward for the next chapters :D
v(^.^)v

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Oh thank you for reading through the whole thing:) I bet it took a lot of time, all in all it´s freaking long:)

Anyway sorry about the sad parts even I am surprised how angsty it turned out:)

And I can not resist, I just wondered who you are, so I clicked on your LJ and so on.. sorry about the intrusion, but ...
Good luck with exams in Belgium and Hungary and enjoy Erasmus while you can, it´s the best:) Oh and we are basically neighbours:) Anyway break a leg or something:)

[zelpet001.livejournal.com]

Thanks, i will try my best to have good results on my exams. :) and yes i enjoy my erasmus but unfonrtunatly i need to back in about 1,5 months (T_T)

and yeah we are basically neighbours XD i was kinda suprised to see some jap fans so close, there arent a lot around me. :D

Keep up the good work :D
v(^ * ^)v

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Ah you would be surprised ... there are plenty:) And LJ is one of the ways of getting to know them ...
1,5 months is still plenty to go ... once again enjoy:)