He knew - chapter 12

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 12
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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I was frightened to write this talk of theirs and I am still not happy about how it turned out but oh well. I can´t do better at the moment. Also how the hell did it become sooo long?  Let me know what you think.

As always comments and constructive criticism are love.

Comments

[oxokawaiiox.livejournal.com]

kaiis first of all : YEY!!! i caught up : )

and second....omg they FINALLY talked?! owh myyy....their talk was sooo good, at least they understand each other neee????
ahhh, yenno ryo always seems to get the wrong idea, is it because he is scared of ueda's rejectionn??? but then i got my answer when ryo asked him if he believed himself and ueda said yes . hehe, cutee♥

and finally tat-chan cried. i was hoping for ryo to stay there with him, but even though he was crying alone, it ened off smooth and awesome 7hearts;

thanks~~~ can't wait till you update ; ) (lol~ i'll catch up)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

You caught up completely, wau ...:)
O am glad you liked their talk ... and I think Ryo just needs some time to think things over:)
I think it was better for Tat-chan to cry alone ... to be free to cry as long as he needed ...
And thank you again for being so generous to me when commenting:) ♥