One shot: Here with you

[higure]

Title: Here with you
Pairing: Sho/Aiba (established)
Rating: PG 13 (?)
Summary: Sho gets a little too comfortable in Aiba´s living room and their relationship.

No beta
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.

Requested by/ for resha_hime

 

Through the storm we reach the shore
You give it all but I want more
And I'm waiting for you
U2, With or Without you

This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: maybe daydreaming, maybe planning their free time activities


IDEK!!! As my sister put it, nothing is sacred for me anymore (now this is totally Slovak idiom and I can´t for my life recall some English equivalent). And it´s been a while since I wrote in the past tense, so it might be a mess, especially the section with Sho alone n Aiba´s apartment. I apologize.

Also other than the first sentence that says “Sho-chan …” I am really doubtful about this. I can´t grasp Arashi, I think. That´s why I was so reluctant to write them. Also this is the first thing in several days that didn´t get deleted before it was finished or afterwards. It took a loads of will power to not hit Ctrl+A and Delete. But I kind of got affectionate towards this at the end so I am posting it and I hope it is not a total miss. Also I think the household rules thing might be completely unnecessary but I didn´t want to leave that piece of paper unattended. I should write one more Sakuraiba, and I will because I have an idea for it but I might butcher them again.

Yeah, I would appreciate someone telling me how much off I am with this. I won´t mind at all, au contraire!

Comments

[gacktsgirl346.livejournal.com]

Omg this was really really lovely~~ ^^ I absolutely adored this fic! :DD
I think you captured them really quite well, with Aiba's exuberance for being with Sho, and yet his patience for Sho's work. I thought Sho was being a little too mean to Aiba (but then again I am a complete fluff writer so I might be bias xD) but I think the way you portrayed him really worked for this fic~ I think it made the ending just that much sweeter, and I absolutely adore sweet endings~ ^-^
As for your English, I thought it worked awesomely! ^^ I'm a native English speaker, and while I was reading this I thought you were too! Then i got to the end and realized it's not your native language! lol! xD So great job! I did see this line tho:

"He was used to go to Aiba´s place after work all the time. "

Change 'go' to 'going' and it'll be perfect! :D

Really, I'm glad you didn't delete this story because I absolutely loved it! Please do write your next Sakuraiba, I'd love to read it~
Thanks for sharing this story! <3

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

*___* can you like quote a comment because it made you so happy?

I am aware of Sho being mean in this, and yes I guess it is because I did try for this to be not a complete fluff. On the other hand, I love writing fluff and that´s how most of my works turn out, so I get where you are coming from XDDD

<3 and ♥ and thank you for saying all those nice things about this poor fiction of mine! I appreciate it greatly! And saying my mistakes weren´t so obvious as to give me away ♥. As you can see I am not coherent right now XD

I am off to fix that mistake and thanks again for your kind words! <3