One shot: Here with you
Oct. 24th, 2009 02:17 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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Title: Here with you
Pairing: Sho/Aiba (established)
Rating: PG 13 (?)
Summary: Sho gets a little too comfortable in Aiba´s living room and their relationship.
No beta
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
Requested by/ forresha_hime
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pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: maybe daydreaming, maybe planning their free time activities
IDEK!!! As my sister put it, nothing is sacred for me anymore (now this is totally Slovak idiom and I can´t for my life recall some English equivalent). And it´s been a while since I wrote in the past tense, so it might be a mess, especially the section with Sho alone n Aiba´s apartment. I apologize.
Also other than the first sentence that says “Sho-chan …” I am really doubtful about this. I can´t grasp Arashi, I think. That´s why I was so reluctant to write them. Also this is the first thing in several days that didn´t get deleted before it was finished or afterwards. It took a loads of will power to not hit Ctrl+A and Delete. But I kind of got affectionate towards this at the end so I am posting it and I hope it is not a total miss. Also I think the household rules thing might be completely unnecessary but I didn´t want to leave that piece of paper unattended. I should write one more Sakuraiba, and I will because I have an idea for it but I might butcher them again.
Yeah, I would appreciate someone telling me how much off I am with this. I won´t mind at all, au contraire!
Pairing: Sho/Aiba (established)
Rating: PG 13 (?)
Summary: Sho gets a little too comfortable in Aiba´s living room and their relationship.
No beta
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
Requested by/ for
resha_hime Through the storm we reach the shore
You give it all but I want more
And I'm waiting for you
U2, With or Without you
You give it all but I want more
And I'm waiting for you
U2, With or Without you
This fic was moved to my writing community
pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: maybe daydreaming, maybe planning their free time activities IDEK!!! As my sister put it, nothing is sacred for me anymore (now this is totally Slovak idiom and I can´t for my life recall some English equivalent). And it´s been a while since I wrote in the past tense, so it might be a mess, especially the section with Sho alone n Aiba´s apartment. I apologize.
Also other than the first sentence that says “Sho-chan …” I am really doubtful about this. I can´t grasp Arashi, I think. That´s why I was so reluctant to write them. Also this is the first thing in several days that didn´t get deleted before it was finished or afterwards. It took a loads of will power to not hit Ctrl+A and Delete. But I kind of got affectionate towards this at the end so I am posting it and I hope it is not a total miss. Also I think the household rules thing might be completely unnecessary but I didn´t want to leave that piece of paper unattended. I should write one more Sakuraiba, and I will because I have an idea for it but I might butcher them again.
Yeah, I would appreciate someone telling me how much off I am with this. I won´t mind at all, au contraire!
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Date: 2009-10-24 07:34 pm (UTC)I am aware of Sho being mean in this, and yes I guess it is because I did try for this to be not a complete fluff. On the other hand, I love writing fluff and that´s how most of my works turn out, so I get where you are coming from XDDD
<3 and ♥ and thank you for saying all those nice things about this poor fiction of mine! I appreciate it greatly! And saying my mistakes weren´t so obvious as to give me away ♥. As you can see I am not coherent right now XD
I am off to fix that mistake and thanks again for your kind words! <3