One shot: Here with you
Oct. 24th, 2009 02:17 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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Title: Here with you
Pairing: Sho/Aiba (established)
Rating: PG 13 (?)
Summary: Sho gets a little too comfortable in Aiba´s living room and their relationship.
No beta
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
Requested by/ forresha_hime
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pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: maybe daydreaming, maybe planning their free time activities
IDEK!!! As my sister put it, nothing is sacred for me anymore (now this is totally Slovak idiom and I can´t for my life recall some English equivalent). And it´s been a while since I wrote in the past tense, so it might be a mess, especially the section with Sho alone n Aiba´s apartment. I apologize.
Also other than the first sentence that says “Sho-chan …” I am really doubtful about this. I can´t grasp Arashi, I think. That´s why I was so reluctant to write them. Also this is the first thing in several days that didn´t get deleted before it was finished or afterwards. It took a loads of will power to not hit Ctrl+A and Delete. But I kind of got affectionate towards this at the end so I am posting it and I hope it is not a total miss. Also I think the household rules thing might be completely unnecessary but I didn´t want to leave that piece of paper unattended. I should write one more Sakuraiba, and I will because I have an idea for it but I might butcher them again.
Yeah, I would appreciate someone telling me how much off I am with this. I won´t mind at all, au contraire!
Pairing: Sho/Aiba (established)
Rating: PG 13 (?)
Summary: Sho gets a little too comfortable in Aiba´s living room and their relationship.
No beta
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
Requested by/ for
resha_hime Through the storm we reach the shore
You give it all but I want more
And I'm waiting for you
U2, With or Without you
You give it all but I want more
And I'm waiting for you
U2, With or Without you
This fic was moved to my writing community
pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: maybe daydreaming, maybe planning their free time activities IDEK!!! As my sister put it, nothing is sacred for me anymore (now this is totally Slovak idiom and I can´t for my life recall some English equivalent). And it´s been a while since I wrote in the past tense, so it might be a mess, especially the section with Sho alone n Aiba´s apartment. I apologize.
Also other than the first sentence that says “Sho-chan …” I am really doubtful about this. I can´t grasp Arashi, I think. That´s why I was so reluctant to write them. Also this is the first thing in several days that didn´t get deleted before it was finished or afterwards. It took a loads of will power to not hit Ctrl+A and Delete. But I kind of got affectionate towards this at the end so I am posting it and I hope it is not a total miss. Also I think the household rules thing might be completely unnecessary but I didn´t want to leave that piece of paper unattended. I should write one more Sakuraiba, and I will because I have an idea for it but I might butcher them again.
Yeah, I would appreciate someone telling me how much off I am with this. I won´t mind at all, au contraire!
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Date: 2009-10-24 07:24 pm (UTC)I am happy you liked this and I was going for a bit of melancholy to tell the truth. I also realize Sho is kind of mean in this. The thing is I really showed just a small portion of their days, I still believe they had their moments just they were drawn in the sea of "not-moments" if you know what I mean.
About Aiba-throwing tantrum, I will remember it for the next time, that he too doesn´t have everlasting patience. It´s just that he gives off the vibe of someone who would rather step back when it comes to serious stuff, keep it in him, but on the other hand he has a huge temperament so I don´t really have a firm base for this assumption of mine. That´s why I keep saying I can´t grasp Arashi. They have so many layers, they are so complex, urgh ... Writing them for me is stripping them of those things and they do come out a little exagerated, don´t they?
Once again thank you for writting up that comment, it made me super happy:) I am glad you gave me such an insightfull feedback. ♥